Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them.however others do not agree .Discuss both sides and give your opinion

In the era of technology, some
people
are of opinion that libraries should be replaced with
computers
as they are
wastage
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a wastage
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of both resources and money, while others
doesn't
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agree with it. Though there are arguments, I radically believe that they should be replaced with
computers
.
This
essay will discuss both
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sides and explain the reasons.
To begin
with the agreeing part, the one reason
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out is the value of
Time
. In the modern age, when
things
change constantly and everyone
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striving to cope up with the
things
, why waste your
time
finding out something( a solution, information) from
books
as they are
time consuming
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when compared to
computers
which can provide you
the
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results in seconds.
For instance
, when a person wants to know about the details of a
plant like
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what conditions are required for it to grow and stay healthy, additional nutritions to be provided, etc he has to use Biological
books
if
library
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the library
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is
choosen
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chosen
choose
as an option. If he is lucky
then
he'll find it soon, else it may take
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amount of his
time
which can be used in other activities.
This
is not in the case of
computers
, just type the questions and it presents you the answers within seconds.
Secondly
, storage and
maintainance
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maintenance
. A library requires a huge amount of space for the
books
to be stored which might be damaged if no proper care is taken.
Additionally
, if these handwritten copies are scanned and made into pdfs,
then
anyone can access them anytime, anywhere by just sending a copy of it
throghh
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through
emails.
On the other hand
, coming to
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disagreeing
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part,
couple
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of reasons stand in the way of replacing the libraries.
Firstly
,
generation
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the generation
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gap.
In other words
, old
people
are used to readings
books
and they find it hard to replace their habit with
the
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computers
.
For example
, few
people
who don't use
computers
prefer
traditional
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the traditional
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way of learning as they feel why change when something that works fine. It depends on the
prespective
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perspective
though.
Second
, but most important lack of access to technology(
computers
). Only
urbans
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urban
and
suburbans
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Suburbans
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have
financial
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the financial
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stability to most extend.
This
is not the case in rural areas.
For example
,
person
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a person
the person
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living in a city ears more when compared to rural
people
, so they have the luxury to spend on
things
like
these
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modecn
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modern
tech. Whereas,
this
case
not
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applicable to
rurals
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rural
as their income is less. In conclusion,
adapting
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adopting
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the
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changes always
benifits
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benefits
in one way or the other, so
i
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I
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believe the libraries should be replaced with
the
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computers
,
although
it will cost us,
but
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the government with the right policies can handle
things
.
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