Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them.however others do not agree .Discuss both sides and give your opinion
In the era of technology, some
people
are of opinion that libraries should be replaced with Use synonyms
computers
as they are Use synonyms
wastage
of both resources and money, while others Correct article usage
a wastage
doesn't
agree with it. Though there are arguments, I radically believe that they should be replaced with Change the verb form
don't
computers
. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss both Linking Words
the
sides and explain the reasons.
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apply
To begin
with the agreeing part, the one reason Linking Words
stands
out is the value of Correct pronoun usage
that stands
Time
. In the modern age, when Use synonyms
things
change constantly and everyone Use synonyms
are
striving to cope up with the Change the verb form
is
things
, why waste your Use synonyms
time
finding out something( a solution, information) from Use synonyms
books
as they are Use synonyms
Use synonyms
time consuming
when compared to Add a hyphen
time-consuming
computers
which can provide you Use synonyms
the
results in seconds. Add the preposition
with the
For instance
, when a person wants to know about the details of a Linking Words
plant like
what conditions are required for it to grow and stay healthy, additional nutritions to be provided, etc he has to use Biological Add a hyphen
plant-like
books
if Use synonyms
library
is Add an article
the library
choosen
as an option. If he is lucky Correct your spelling
chosen
choose
then
he'll find it soon, else it may take Linking Words
enormous
amount of his Add an article
an enormous
time
which can be used in other activities. Use synonyms
This
is not in the case of Linking Words
computers
, just type the questions and it presents you the answers within seconds. Use synonyms
Secondly
, storage and Linking Words
maintainance
. A library requires a huge amount of space for the Correct your spelling
maintenance
books
to be stored which might be damaged if no proper care is taken. Use synonyms
Additionally
, if these handwritten copies are scanned and made into pdfs, Linking Words
then
anyone can access them anytime, anywhere by just sending a copy of it Linking Words
throghh
emails.
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through
On the other hand
, coming to Linking Words
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disagreeing
disgreeing
part, Correct article usage
the disgreeing
couple
of reasons stand in the way of replacing the libraries. Change the article
a couple
Firstly
, Linking Words
generation
gap. Correct article usage
the generation
In other words
, old Linking Words
people
are used to readings Use synonyms
books
and they find it hard to replace their habit with Use synonyms
the
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apply
computers
. Use synonyms
For example
, few Linking Words
people
who don't use Use synonyms
computers
prefer Use synonyms
traditional
way of learning as they feel why change when something that works fine. It depends on the Add an article
the traditional
prespective
though. Correct your spelling
perspective
Second
, but most important lack of access to technology(Linking Words
computers
). Only Use synonyms
urbans
and Correct your spelling
urban
suburbans
have Change the capitalization
Suburbans
financial
stability to most extend. Add an article
the financial
This
is not the case in rural areas. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
person
living in a city ears more when compared to rural Add an article
a person
the person
people
, so they have the luxury to spend on Use synonyms
things
like Use synonyms
these
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this modecn tech
these modecn techs
modecn
tech. Whereas, Correct your spelling
modern
this
case Linking Words
not
applicable to Add a missing verb
is not
rurals
as their income is less.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
rural
adapting
Correct your spelling
adopting
the
changes always Change preposition
to the
benifits
in one way or the other, so Correct your spelling
benefits
i
believe the libraries should be replaced with Change the capitalization
I
the
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apply
computers
, Use synonyms
although
it will cost us, Linking Words
but
the government with the right policies can handle Remove the conjunction
apply
things
.Use synonyms
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