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Some people say that it is a waste of time to focus on future and important to focus on present. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

#people #waste #time #focus #future
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Nowadays,
people
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 have a different idea about which they have to
focus
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 on
future
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 or present. In my opinion, I believe that the
future
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 will be great if I do it best every day. So I agree that it is important to
focus
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 on what you do now more than focusing on what you will be in the
future
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.
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 of all, in the present, Technology
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 as artificial intelligence(AI) has developed a lot from in the past, which will be used
instead
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 in some human works.
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,
people
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 have to try hard if they want to get their job in the present.
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,
people
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 did not have the
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 to
focus
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 on what will happen in the
future
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 because the competition in the present is very high, everyone has to
focus
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 on their works and make them as good and fast as they can.
On the other hand
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,
people
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 who are thinking about what will occur in the
future
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 or thinking I will be rich by not doing anything changed from their normal might have lost their opportunity and
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 to get the result that they want to be. Due to the
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 never wait for anyone, my father told me " One day you will leave
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 world behind, so live a life you will remember and do it best that you did not regret after ". to conclude, I agree that focusing on the
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 will waste the
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, I think it important to
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 on what you do in the present, which will lead to what will happen in your
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. So do not think too much but do it a lot.
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