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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. DO the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

#years #people #e-books #paper #books
Due to an increase in advanced technology,
people
 have been willing to change their traditional habits.
Thus
, it is becoming normal to see
people
 everywhere, reading
books
 on a
device
instead
 of the traditional paper
books
.
However
, before following
this
 trend and replacing our paper
books
 there are some aspects we should consider,
for instance
, the benefits of saving space where we used to lay
books
,
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 and the initial cost of buying a suitable
device
 to read them.
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 my opinion, the positive aspects of
e-
books
 outweigh the negative ones. On the one hand, we have book lovers, who argue that if we read
books
 through a
device
, the best reading experience will be lost. That includes the smell of a new book, the texture of the paper and the feeling of turning pages.
Furthermore
, in order to keep the health of our eyes, is crucial
read
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e-
books
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 a
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device
,
such
 as Kindle.
Thus
, the fact of investing money
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 a
device
 is definitely a negative aspect. Since we can read a plethora of
books
 for free,
as
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 borrow from a friend or in a clubs of reading.
On the other hand
, we have
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facilities since
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e-
books
 became popular.
To begin
with
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 saving spaces:
people
 can store an entire library of
e-
books
 on their phones, tablet or Kindle and not take up an inch of physical shelf space.
Moreover
, carrying a heavy book in a backpack
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 example, can be extremely inconvenient. Another benefit of
e-
books
 is the cost of purchasing
books
. Currently, there is the possibility to pay for a membership in online libraries.
As a result
,
people
 can read as
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books
 as they like for a fixed amount. In conclusion, after
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this
 subject, we can understand that
although
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e-
books
. I hold my opinion that the advantages of
this
 issue outweigh the disadvantages.
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