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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. DO the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Due to an increase in advanced technology,
people
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 have been willing to change their traditional habits.
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, it is becoming normal to see
people
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 everywhere, reading
books
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 on a
device
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instead
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 of the traditional paper
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.
However
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, before following
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 trend and replacing our paper
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 there are some aspects we should consider,
for instance
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, the benefits of saving space where we used to lay
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 and the initial cost of buying a suitable
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 to read them.
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 my opinion, the positive aspects of
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books
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 outweigh the negative ones. On the one hand, we have book lovers, who argue that if we read
books
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 through a
device
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, the best reading experience will be lost. That includes the smell of a new book, the texture of the paper and the feeling of turning pages.
Furthermore
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, in order to keep the health of our eyes, is crucial
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e-
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books
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 a
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device
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,
such
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 as Kindle.
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, the fact of investing money
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 a
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 is definitely a negative aspect. Since we can read a plethora of
books
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 for free,
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 borrow from a friend or in a clubs of reading.
On the other hand
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, we have
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numerous
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facilities since
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e-
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books
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 became popular.
To begin
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 saving spaces:
people
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 can store an entire library of
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books
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 on their phones, tablet or Kindle and not take up an inch of physical shelf space.
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, carrying a heavy book in a backpack
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 example, can be extremely inconvenient. Another benefit of
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books
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 is the cost of purchasing
books
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. Currently, there is the possibility to pay for a membership in online libraries.
As a result
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,
people
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 can read as
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books
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 as they like for a fixed amount. In conclusion, after
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 analysis
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this
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 subject, we can understand that
although
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 there are some negative sides
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e-
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books
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. I hold my opinion that the advantages of
this
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 issue outweigh the disadvantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • environmental impact
  • sustainability
  • interactive features
  • accessibility
  • vast library
  • promotions
  • deforestation
  • visual impairments
  • reading disabilities
  • burden
  • enhance
  • save money
  • reading experience
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