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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

#libraries #waste #money #computer #technology #functions
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***The question of whether maintaining public
libraries
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 is a waste of money has become a matter of debate in recent years because it is believed that their functions can be replaced by
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 technology. I strongly disagree with
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 opinion and
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 explanations.*** ***On the one hand, it is true that
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 machinery can bring about several significant benefits.
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, using the
computer
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 is a time-consuming and convenient way for readers to access
books
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. Specifically, reading online
books
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 can allow people to save time that was spent on finding wanted
books
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 on many large shelves in public
libraries
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. As a consequence, customers using virtual
libraries
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 can have a better experience in enjoying their favourite
books
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.
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,
computer
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 technology
also
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 offers a more safe way of saving
books
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 and similar materials. The reason lies in the fact that traditional public
libraries
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 are easy to be damaged by natural disasters
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 as fire, storms or other like.
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, online
libraries
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 are not susceptible to mentioned situations because they act based on the Internet, which is very prevalent and common at present.*** ***
On the other hand
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, public
libraries
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also
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 have many considerable advantages which are quite difficult for computers to replace.
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 and foremost, reading paper
books
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 in place of online versions can help humans to prevent many eye-related diseases. To be more specific, nowadays people are spending time on the
computer
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 to excess for a large number of purposes,
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 they easily have many health problems relative to eyes owing to drawbacks of the screen's blue light.
As a result
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, reading paper
books
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 should be their preference to avoid mentioned health issues.
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, some special kinds of
books
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 are only saved in traditional
libraries
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. An example can be seen in Vietnam, where there is a national library which is maintaining many famous special
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 as a hand-writing version of an excellent story called Truyen Kieu, which is impossible to save in any kind of virtual facility.*** ***In conclusion,
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computer
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 automation is advantageous in some ways, I believe maintaining public
libraries
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 is more beneficial in the long run.***
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repositories of books
  • promoting literacy
  • community engagement
  • equal access to information
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
  • personalized assistance
  • educational programs
  • cultural events
  • safe spaces
  • community meetings
  • tactile experience
  • preserving historical documents
  • important cultural repositories
  • fostering a sense of community
  • communal hubs
  • serene and focused environment
  • conducive to study and reflection
  • irreplaceable value
  • distracted environment
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