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It is important that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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If societies were to be described with just one word,
this
 would probably be diversity.
This
 is why I strongly believe it is important that people with different social backgrounds and personalities interact
since
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 a very early age.
To begin
 with, interaction with different social levels gives cohesion in society. As a matter of fact, several studies conducted in the past proved
to
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this
 to increase citizen’s level of awareness about socioeconomic-related problems.
This
 being fostered since a very early stage of education produces even better results. Rich social interactions
also
 allow
children
 to get new approaches to concepts, even with the simplest of ideas and
also
 force them to accept differences and treat them wisely. It is true that differences are often the trigger of social issues among
children
such
 as bullying.
However
, they are normally a consequence of professors and parents not approaching the issue with the attacker since the very
first
 sign of the problem. Would
this
 be treated adequate,
children
 would learn to accept and welcome minorities and backgrounds that are totally different to their own. Overall, the results of a
socially-rich
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 education can make an extremely positive impact in both society and
children
itself
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themselves
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 and if conducted appropriately can by far overtake the possible risks that it can have.
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