Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is often argued that governments need to fund the railway tracks than
roads
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. I totally disagree that railways need more funding than
motor way
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motorway
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. One of the reasons why I think that
roads
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should be funded more than train tracks is because motor
roads
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are very essential in the society as it serves as a means of transportation of food from one place to the other. When the
roads
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are built properly due to proper funding, transportation of agricultural
product
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products
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from one part of the country to another becomes easy.
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, there is
availability
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the availability
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of food.
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, in recent
time
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times
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the transporters in the northern part of Nigeria refused
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tomatoes, pepper and onions to the south because of the bad
roads
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,
hence
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, these items became scarce and the available ones were sold at outrageous prices. Another reason why I believe that the government should spend more costs on
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projects is
because
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there will be minimal
accidents
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on the highway.
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trains are used to carry heavy objects, we cannot ignore the fact that individuals travel more in cars and commercial buses than trains. When the
road
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is good without potholes, the rate of
accidents
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is reduced.
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, the Warri to Lagos
road
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had a bad spot where
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occurred almost
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. The
road
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was repaired and since
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only a few
accidents
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have been recorded on that expressway. In conclusion,
although
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railways are important in the society for transporting heavy objects and people, I believe that governments should spend more money on
roads
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rather than trains because of food security and
also
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to reduce the rates
if
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accident
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an accident
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in
the
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society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Carbon emissions
  • Mass transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic growth
  • Regional development
  • Initial investment
  • Feasibility
  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
  • Modal shift
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