Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people argue that the punishments should be fixed for the respective case, and
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, it is argued that
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needs to consider the motivation for committing and
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the circumstances for the respective criminal act. I strongly believe that punishments should not be allocated to each case.
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, the
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needs to include the criminal's mentality and their inspiration for committing the crime.
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of all, Every country's lawsuit has its own rules and particular punishments for an individual crime(Mostly, depends on the section and articles). In my country(India), we do have separate sections and articles in the constitution for criminal acts which were written in past, around the 1940s. As far as I'm concerned that
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needs to be changed,
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, myriad criminal cases involved in molestation and rapes towards females, and courts only punish with lifetime jail.
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needs to be changed, a particular criminal who has done
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needs to be hanged.
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, there were myriad cases on psychos, that was describing that psycho is murdering people for no reason and these psychos
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keeping some sort of souvenirs at the place where they hide the dead body, which they killed. In these
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of criminal acts, I strongly believe that the
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needs to identify the motivation of the criminal.
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, police directly encounter these
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of psychos, These
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criminals need to be testified with professional psychiatrists. So, these
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of crimes can be controlled In conclusion, I think that decision must be made by including the criminal's inspiration and mentality, directly encountering them or depending on particular punishment never knows the motivation of particular criminal and the respective type of crimes may be increased.
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