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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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It is widely believed by some people that the primary environmental drawback of today's life is plants and animals species extinction. Regardless of all environmental problems stem from species loss I,
however
, hold the view that other issues like global warming give rise to some substantial problems for the environment. On the one hand, plants and animals are endangered on account of human encroachment on nature which poses a serious threat to their life. By way of illustration consider a huge amount of logging trees for producing paper, wooden artefacts and so on.
Also
, air and water pollution have occurred in many countries of the world after the industrial revolution.
On the other hand
, endangered animals and plants because of Human encroachment on nature To sum up,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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