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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online? Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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online shopping has become the favourite purchasing
method
 of many
customers
, mostly because of the restraint order during the pandemic and its convenience. To give people
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multi-
dimentional
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dimensional
 views about
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online shopping,
this
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this
method
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 personal opinion. Purchasing products via social media can bring plenty of advantages to both
customers
 and
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retailers.
First
 of all, online shopping can reduce a considerable amount of time for individuals.
For instance
, if a person decides to use the traditional way of shopping, they will go to the store, look for suitable products among the shelves, and purchase them,
thus
 it will take them a lot of
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 and time in order to find the goods that meet their expectation.
This
 is entirely opposite to online shopping, which is extremely easy to buy any product.
Secondly
, especially for retailers, they can cut down many expenses through
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network
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.
However
, despite the benefits that
this
method
 brings, there are some disadvantages that people should be aware
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. The quality of the products is not guaranteed to satisfied the
customers
.
Moreover
,
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confidential protection is another factor that
customers
 should consider before deciding to
purchasing
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 through
social
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network
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. In conclusion, every
method
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 their own
exemplaries
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exemplars
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inauspiciousnesses
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inauspiciousness
, but I personally believe that the online shopping market will continue to grow in the future.
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