Some people prefer to spend their lives doing same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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like to live their life by following the routine works they do.
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, some other categories always try to take challenges to enjoy
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life. I will discuss
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both
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points in detail along with my opinion in the following paragraphs.
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with, Financial instability and family responsibilities are the major reason for a person to stick
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the
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they perform.
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, for
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people
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stability is more important rather than their interest to continue the
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.
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, because of convenience and flexibility, someone who used
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same routine may dislike
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the profession, if they get better placement
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. To exemplify, many working in government sectors like to commute daily, from day one till retirement without changing the profession. To continue with,
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, few other
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always enjoy life by taking risks without thinking about the long term impact it costs. Because nowadays finding a
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is equally difficult to
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a mountain. So, in
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circumstance leaving a
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for trying another one is really challenging.
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, many succeed after taking a risk,
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the same time few others had
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negatively
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mainly depends on the right decision at the right time. To exemplify, many IT professionals frequently change their working environment to seek promotion and salary increment. To conclude, in my
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people
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can be more productive if they do their
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of interest, as well as they even can enjoy their work. So, one can change the
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if they get
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better placement of their wish.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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