Some people prefer to spend their lives doing same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A group of
people
like to live their life by following the routine works they do. However
, some other categories always try to take challenges to enjoy the
life. I will discuss Correct article usage
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about
both Remove the preposition
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the
points in detail along with my opinion in the following paragraphs.
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To begin
with, Financial instability and family responsibilities are the major reason for a person to stick on
the Change preposition
to
job
they perform. However
, for this
category people
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job
stability is more important rather than their interest to continue the job
. In addition
, because of convenience and flexibility, someone who used with
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this
same routine may dislike to change
the profession, if they get better placement Change the verb form
changing
also
. To exemplify, many working in government sectors like to commute daily, from day one till retirement without changing the profession.
To continue with, On the contrary
, few other people
always enjoy life by taking risks without thinking about the long term impact it costs. Because nowadays finding a job
is equally difficult to climbing
a mountain. So, in Change the form of the verb
climb
this
circumstance leaving a job
for trying another one is really challenging. For instance
, many succeed after taking a risk, by
the same time few others had Change preposition
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affected
negatively Add a missing verb
been affected
also
. In other
words
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,words
this
mainly depends on the right decision at the right time. To exemplify, many IT professionals frequently change their working environment to seek promotion and salary increment.
To conclude, in my opinion
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people
can be more productive if they do their job
of interest, as well as they even can enjoy their work. So, one can change the job
if they get a
better placement of their wish.Remove the article
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