In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is claimed that many youngsters who already got
degree
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in education and have a job still live with
parents
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.
This
is the popular situation in many countries over the world. I believe that there are some advantages and disadvantages
for
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it and it is equal for both sides.
First
of all, living with
parents
can help young people save
the
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amount of money
such
as renting
house
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and buying food. The price of an apartment in many big cities is increasing significantly,
therefore
it is extremely difficult for them to own a flat
instead
of making efforts in many years.
Besides
, the youth will take care of their
parents
. In Asian culture,
parents
usually want their children to live with them and get married in order to be an extended family.
For instance
, my sister has worked in the factory and has lived with my
parents
in our childhood
house
. My
parents
are over 70 years old and they want her to build a family in their
house
.
On the contrary
, there are some disadvantages
about
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this
situation. Young adults can depend much on their
parents
because they are not worried about buying
house
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for the cost of living. These
parents
will provide money or fortune for their children,
therefore
the youngers do not need efforts in their life.
Furthermore
, the young generation may be scared of getting out of
the
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comfort zone and accept the present. The youth can avoid the changes due to afraid of
failures
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failure
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. In conclusion,
this
phenomenon has two sides :
advantage
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advantages
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and
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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. It is
also
a challenge for young adults to the make
their
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decision
that is
suitable for themselves and their
parents
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cohabitation
  • intergenerational living
  • self-sufficiency
  • financial stability
  • maturation
  • dependency
  • socio-economic factors
  • familial dynamics
  • personal autonomy
  • housing affordability
  • cultural expectations
  • life trajectory
  • emotional resilience
  • nuclear family
  • joint family system
  • economic prudence
  • privacy concerns
  • social stigma
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