The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modren life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages overweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in
modernistic
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world, people usually prefer to eat convenience
foods
in their daily busy life. These
trend
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affect both the way of life and
health
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the health
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of persons to a great extent. In
this
essay, I will discuss both pros and cons associated with
this
trend.
To begin
with, the
first
important advantage is that we can easily buy these
foods
from different shops. It can be in proper packing which helps individuals to bring in a
comfortably
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manner. Due to the hectic schedule, working members do not have enough capacity to prepare food at home. So, they buy full or
half cooked
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foods
.
Moreover
, sometimes people feel bored
for
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with
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eating standard
foods
such
as rice, daal, chapati etc. They want to eat some different
foods
.
Hence
, packed
foods
plays
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an important role
specially
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for working
employyes
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employees
who have less time to cook
foos
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food
foods
at home.
On the other hand
,
despites
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of
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this
trajectory, the drawback cannot be undermined.
Firstly
, these
foods
like pasta, noodles, pizza give very dangerous
affect
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to
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our
health
. Fast involves too much oil and sugar which do not give any nutritious value to the
body
.
Furthermore
, these
foods
results
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so many
illness
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illnesses
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in the
body
like memory loss,
diabities
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diabetes
, damage kidneys, raise blood pressure and various others problems. Studies
shows
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that those people who are eating
such
foods
have 80%
health
problems as compared to those who do not or less eat.
Therefore
, we cannot eat fast
foods
in excess because it will affect the mental and physical
health
of the
body
. To conclude, it can be deduced that in spite of the benefits of
easily
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availability and small efforts, it can
also
leads
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to various diseases. We should prefer to eat simple food with
small
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quantity of oil and sugar and if we want to eat fast food it should be eaten in
right
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the right
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manner which will not harm
for
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our
body
.
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