Many museums charge for admission wile others are free. do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweighs the disadvantages ?

There are many museums requiring
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while others are given for free. From my point of view knowledge and
education
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resources should be
acessible
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accessible
, the
museum
has many costs to concern and look after more than people think. It is undeniable that educations need to be easy to
aceese
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access
for everyone. It is
importent
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important
for students to have a huge public
place
where they can be
inspred
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inspired
, learn
somthing
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something
new and expand their
knowldge
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knowledge
out from schools.
Moreover
, the
place
is not only for
pupills
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pupils
museum
can be one of the best
traveling
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acttraction
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attraction
for
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a traveler
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traveler
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for example
historical palaces and huge art galleries
is
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not only for
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local
citizen but
also
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a traveler
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traveler
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traveller
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who want to understand the culture in the country. Due to these important factors, there are many opinions say that
museum
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need
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to be free to
entrance
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.
However
, there are many
charges
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behind the huge public education
place
.
Maintainace
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Maintenance
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payment is an
initially
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factor to concer
thus
many exhibitions have a high cost of electricities and facilities
such
as lights, air-conditions and electric devices which is the most a fixed payment in every
months
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. In
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addiction
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, the
museum
need
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to pay
much
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money for historical pieces and artworks
in particular
many old art pieces spend much time and cost for investigation and
studying
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. Following
this
, Updating zones and expanding the galleries, the public
place
has to hire more
employee
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employees
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to organise. the least
and
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important factor is to make the visitors
awear
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aware
of the displays. Many visitors may not care
of
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statues or artworks if they have to spend money. In conclusion, since the museums have many
resonable
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reasonable
costs to pay, it seems to me that the visitor fees
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outweight
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outweighed
outweigh
than fully free admission.
Also
, Governments need to support the cost for
this
kind of public space to help not only make
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remain but
also
support education for their citizens.
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