It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age .Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children ?

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: Early

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is the learning stage of life. Whatever is learned

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early

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, can remember longer in life.So I strongly believe that

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to learn the difference between

right

or wrong at an early

age

is significant for

children

.

However

,

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is a debatable issue to me that,

punishment

is obligatory to help the

children

to learn

this

divergence. I would like to give my clear opinion regarding

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issues.

First

and foremost ,

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are

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of the nation .So they can become

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good human

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, have to be nurtured from an early

age

.

Children

need to be taught properly, what is the distinction between

right

or wrong. If they raise up with the wrong thing, it is not only

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harmful for society but

also

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be

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brutally.

Moreover

, they

also

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the family .

For instance

, there are a number of

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in my country, who did not foster precisely

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, after growing up they become

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. So my opinion is ,

Children

know the difference between

right

and wrong at

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early

age

.

On the other hand

, I largely disagree that,

punishment

is necessary to help them learn

this

distinction. Because physical or mental

punishment

might have an adverse effect on the

children

’s

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.

Furthermore

, sometimes we get them venerable

punishment

for

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offence which most of the time crime mentality increases among them.

However

, if they do not get

punishment

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for their wrong activities

then

, they will never regret

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their crime and day by day it will grow . Though Some

children

repeat mistakes even after being warned and punished. In my perspective ,they get to be punished in

such

a way that they can realize their mistake and the

punishment

does not affect their tender heart. Like, If any child

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with others

then

,the whole day they will

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together inside a room or he /she thieves any things

then

what is the

punishment

for stealing ? that might

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.

In addition

, sometimes they can be punished physically ,but it would be mild so that

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the

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are not harmed physically and mentally. In conclusion, I would say,

punishment

is not only the solution to help the

children

to learn the distinction between

right

or wrong things, proper guidance, moral education,

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environment and social value are more important ,for that parents and teachers both can keep a vital role.