Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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and I would say for me I love it because sports can help me to get

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better health and changes my lifestyle. But in other ways in many game

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can have drug invite to help athletes have more energetic. Overall, athletic has both negative and positive ways. in my whole

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I have been to many sports

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or even joined the game as well. Hosting an

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is helped you to gains

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because you usually have to set your own goals to win the events so you have to train more than normal people. Eat

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healthier and working out almost every day. Examples football as my brother he's a football player in Thai league so I have seen his daily

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a lot more protein to get more muscles while he

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to the gym he usually has his protein drink

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, as you have seen a lot in the news. There are many drugs provided in the events it basically to help the athletes have more

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and flutter so that it's would benefit to athletes when they doing spots example runner if they using drugs they will have energy more than others so it helps them to run longer than other players. In conclusion, I would say hosting an International athletics is good. It's can help you to have

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same as my brother but you may have to trade the risk of it. Would you like to sign up for any International game events

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time if you have a chance ?

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