Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
During my
life
Use synonyms
,
time
Add an article
the time
a time
show examples
I have seen a lot of hosting an international games
event
Use synonyms
and I would say for me I love it because sports can help me to get
an
Remove the article
apply
show examples
better health and changes my lifestyle. But in other ways in many game
Use synonyms
event
Fix the agreement mistake
events
show examples
can have drug invite to help athletes have more energetic. Overall, athletic has both negative and positive ways. in my whole
Replace the word
life
show examples
lifetime
Add a comma
,lifetime
show examples
I have been to many sports
Use synonyms
event
Fix the agreement mistake
events
show examples
or even joined the game as well. Hosting an
International
Correct your spelling
international
show examples
sports
event
Use synonyms
is helped you to gains
healthier
Correct article usage
a healthier
show examples
Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
lifestyle
show examples
life style
Correct your spelling
lifestyle
show examples
.
Firstly
Linking Words
because you usually have to set your own goals to win the events so you have to train more than normal people. Eat
more
Change the word
apply
show examples
healthier and working out almost every day. Examples football as my brother he's a football player in Thai league so I have seen his daily
life
Use synonyms
changed during the training days. He
eat
Change the verb form
eats
show examples
a lot more protein to get more muscles while he
go
Change the verb form
goes
show examples
to the gym he usually has his protein drink
eith
Correct your spelling
with
him so he won't easily
hungry
Add a missing verb
be hungry
show examples
or
tried
Correct your spelling
tired
show examples
. But on
other
Correct article usage
the other
show examples
hands
Fix the agreement mistake
hand
show examples
, as you have seen a lot in the news. There are many drugs provided in the events it basically to help the athletes have more
energetic
Replace the word
energy
show examples
and flutter so that it's would benefit to athletes when they doing spots example runner if they using drugs they will have energy more than others so it helps them to run longer than other players. In conclusion, I would say hosting an International athletics is good. It's can help you to have
healthier
Correct article usage
a healthier
show examples
Use synonyms
life style
Correct your spelling
lifestyle
show examples
same as my brother but you may have to trade the risk of it. Would you like to sign up for any International game events
nexts
Correct your spelling
next
time if you have a chance ?
Submitted by lipao29 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic boost
  • infrastructure
  • national pride
  • cultural showcase
  • inspire a generation
  • temporary boost
  • environmental concerns
  • sustainable planning
  • public funds
  • divert resources
  • tourism influx
  • job opportunities
  • sports development
  • public health
  • construction
  • strategic investment
  • global audience
  • hospitality
  • public services
  • cost-benefit analysis
What to do next:
Look at other essays: