It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age .Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children ?

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and foremost ,

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of the nation .So they can become

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, have to be nurtured from an early age.

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need to be taught properly, what is the distinction between right or wrong. If they raise up with the wrong thing, it is not only

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harmful for society but

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the family .

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, there are a number of

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early age , after growing up they become

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. So my opinion is ,

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know the difference between right and wrong at

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early age.

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, I largely disagree that,

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is necessary to help them learn

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distinction. Because physical or mental

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might have an adverse effect on the

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.

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, sometimes we get them venerable

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offence which most of the time crime mentality increases among them.

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, if they do not get

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punishment

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for their wrong activities

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, they will never regret

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their crime and day by day it will grow . Though Some

children

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repeat mistakes even after being warned and punished. In my perspective ,they get to be punished in

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a way that they can realize their mistake and the

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does not affect their tender heart. Like, If any child

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with others

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,the whole day they will

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together inside a room or he /she thieves any things

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what is the

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for stealing ? that might

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.

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, sometimes they can be punished physically ,but it would be mild so that

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are not harmed physically and mentally. In conclusion, I would say,

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is not only the solution to help the

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to learn the distinction between right or wrong things, proper guidance, moral education,

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environment and social value are more important ,for that parents and teachers both can keep a vital role.