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some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

#schools #phones #development
I think it is a positive one to take away with the mobile
phone
 in some
schools
. Because the
phone
 is taking a horrible role in studying career, we can’t focus on and pay full attention in learning
time
.
On the other hand
, the radiation of mobile
phones
 is not tiny to the eyes;
thus
, I prefer to confiscate
phones
.   The
phone
 is taking place with books and magazines, and everyone is stuck. So the
schools
 can help the parents to supervise their children to become self-disciplined. Children in
this
 age group are not very concentrated on homework and working
time
,
therefore
, so many people choose another way to educate their kids.
Such
 as, find a personal teacher to teach their kids or sent their kids to a strict school.
However
, most parents prefer the
second
 one, and
schools
 always have a complete system to manage students more strictly. Like, the
phone
 will be confiscated every day, and
then
 returned to you when you need it urgently.
That is
a
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 main reason to support my point.   According to the report, there are more and more people are nearsighted
in
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nowadays. Electronic products are the main accomplices, especially
phones
 is the leading one. Focusing on your
phone
 for a long
time
 will only make your eyes more and more tired.
For example
, if you have to use a computer for study, going to the
phone
 during the break will only make your eyes worse. All in all, the vision of the eye is the most important part of the health system.   I agree the
schools
 create a rule for “
phone
time
 using”, and I hope the
schools
 will strictly enforce the removal of mobile
phones
.
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