some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

I think it is a positive one to take away with the mobile

phone

in some

schools

. Because the

phone

is taking a horrible role in studying career, we can’t focus on and pay full attention in learning

time

.

On the other hand

, the radiation of mobile

phones

is not tiny to the eyes;

thus

, I prefer to confiscate

phones

.   The

phone

is taking place with books and magazines, and everyone is stuck. So the

schools

can help the parents to supervise their children to become self-disciplined. Children in

this

age group are not very concentrated on homework and working

time

,

therefore

, so many people choose another way to educate their kids.

Such

as, find a personal teacher to teach their kids or sent their kids to a strict school.

However

, most parents prefer the

second

one, and

schools

always have a complete system to manage students more strictly. Like, the

phone

will be confiscated every day, and

then

returned to you when you need it urgently.

That is

a

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main reason to support my point.   According to the report, there are more and more people are nearsighted

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nowadays. Electronic products are the main accomplices, especially

phones

is the leading one. Focusing on your

phone

for a long

time

will only make your eyes more and more tired.

For example

, if you have to use a computer for study, going to the

phone

during the break will only make your eyes worse. All in all, the vision of the eye is the most important part of the health system.   I agree the

schools

create a rule for “

phone

time

using”, and I hope the

schools

will strictly enforce the removal of mobile

phones

.