People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get newest fashion and latest technologies. Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh the economic advantages?

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Citizens are influenced by different media and advertisements
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to buy
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updated technological products and
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designer
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clothes
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are give away old products and clothes for cheap , donations or trash .
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type of trend is good for economic development and financial boost for industries. I will discuss
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in detail in
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essay . Now we are living in
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society of disposable goods and short term things. Day by day new development going on and on in computers,games and mobiles ,updated versions keep coming with more functions and people tend to go for it and exchange for old ones.
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thing goes with clothing as novice fashions and seasonal items keep coming so denizens go for it to stay updated in society.
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gives
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big boost to
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fashion and technology industries so they can invest more money in developing new gadgets and technologies.
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condition for employers and employees as they stay busy and governments will get financial benefits from taxes.
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