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Some people agree with spending lots of money on a large wedding, while others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

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Introduction
There is no doubt that a wedding is an initial step
to begin
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 the relationship between husband and wife.
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, some
people
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 consider it beneficial to spend too much amount on
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events
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. I would agree with those who argue that
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 is a complete waste of their savings.
Body paragraph 1
Considering the positives
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, wedding ceremonies might be the best way to establish connections with
people
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 out of touch.
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 is because
people
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 usually meet regularly with their close relatives and friends, but could not spare time to meet other
people
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 involved in their lives. The argument goes that, if there is no concept of celebrations,
people
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 will be isolated from their cultural heritage and more importantly values of relationships.
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,
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events
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 do not generate revenue or have any impact to improve the financial capability, the amount spent is not recoverable. To illustrate, in South Asian countries, wedding
events
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 are considered a symbol of pride, and
people
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 are forced to spend their life savings and face poverty afterwards.
Body paragraph 2
That said, the outcome of spending money on social parties is not measurable.
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, financing students would equip our workforce with qualified professionals, leading to a more competitive society, than funding wedding ceremonies.
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, if one travels around the world to establish contact, share ideas and cultural methodologies with foreigners,
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 would be more beneficial than local gatherings, which can be placed in less expensive places
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 as cafes or parks.
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 will ensure that our
next
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 generation is left with enough financial resources to enough to combat serious issues
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 as homelessness, which were left unresolved, especially in the developing world.
Conclusion
In conclusion,
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 social
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 allow
people
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 to record their best memories and set a good example in their society, we must remember that the spending on these
events
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 must not supersede our priorities for educational or business opportunities, hopefully leading to an absence of problems
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 as bankruptcy or poverty in the worst cases

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