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Some people say that the best way to improve the overall general health of the public is to offer more sports facilities. Others say that this would have little effect and other measure are necessary to improve public health. Discuss both views.

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Health
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 is the most important factor in our everyday routine. Many governments of different parts of the world, play vital a role to make improve public
health
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 in
society
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. Some
people
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 arguing, the best way to improve public
health
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 is by growing the amount of physical
sports
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facilities
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.
On the other hand
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, some are suggesting that required improving on the other factors in order to make general well-being of
society
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.
This
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 essay will explore both views and
then
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 will suggest one of the best strategies to increase
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 indicators.
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 of all, some
people
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 believed the best option is to improve
sports
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facilities
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. I am completely disagreeing with that. Nowadays, especially, consider to the developing countries are faced by the number of issues,
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 as infection, pollution, unemployment, the poverty
people
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, poor hygiene of the
society
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, lack of foods and water, etc… The
government
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 should improve the basic requirements of the
society
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 rather than
sports
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facilities
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. For
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, a poor person could not be able to meet basic needs like shelter, food or hygiene activities.
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, improvement of the
sports
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facilities
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 could support with them to increase by their private well-being.
However
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, the
government
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 should enhance their quality of life, make new opportunities, and establish new rules, policies and regulations to improve the
health
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 compared with the
sports
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facilities
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.
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, some
people
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 believed the number of
sports
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facilities
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 are required to upgrading public hygiene. If the
government
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 spend public money to improve the
health
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 and safety
people
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 like to do more exercises rather than previous.
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, in the Colombo ,area many places have been constructed by the
government
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 to enhance the physical workouts of
society
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,
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 as the walking path, gym
facilities
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, the cycling and running lanes.
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, from my point of view, the
government
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 should be involved to build public well-being and not sufficient to improve public
health
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 throughout
sports
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facilities
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. I am flavour of the
second
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 opinion.

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