In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.

In selected countries, some people make an immense amount of

income

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. There has been an ongoing debate whether the benefits of it

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, or

government

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should intervene and limit the sum of

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people make.

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essay will elucidate both sides of the argument as well as a subjective opinion. On one hand, those who earn astronomical amounts of

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have several benefits for the

country

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’s economy.

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of all, more

income

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means more tax

money

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for the

country

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. From that, the

government

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can allocate the cash into developing the nation.

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, people with a large

income

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are working in industries that can put the

country

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into

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.

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, an infamous neurosurgeon known throughout the continent may attract visitors to the

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for medical tourism.

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, it is sensible that the highly paid individuals contribute to the

country

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.

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, some presume that the

government

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should impose a limit

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citizens’ earnings because it creates a huge gap

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in

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living standards between the wealthy and the poor. To illustrate, living expenses and prices of commodities will increase as the economy gets better.

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, while the rich are still able to afford a lavish lifestyle, those with low

income

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can barely make the ends meet.

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, by constraining the amount

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income

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of income

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,

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issue may be eliminated. In my opinion, I believe that professionals should be able to earn the

money

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they deserve. If they are outstanding and accomplished in their fields of work, they should be offered the pay that reflects their work. If a limit were to

put

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upon, they will be unmotivated in performing their job. To conclude, a small group of highly skilled professionals does reserve the

rights

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to get paid extravagantly. Some disagree

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phenomenon and presume

government

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is responsible to

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, as it could create certain problems for the poor.

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, if people’s salaries are restrained, it will stir up indifference for the skilled.