In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
The verb outweighs does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
The noun phrase spotlight seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.
It seems that rights may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example