In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.

In selected countries, some people make an immense amount of
income
. There has been an ongoing debate whether the benefits of it
outweighs
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, or
government
should intervene and limit the sum of
money
people make.
This
essay will elucidate both sides of the argument as well as a subjective opinion. On one hand, those who earn astronomical amounts of
money
have several benefits for the
country
’s economy.
First
of all, more
income
means more tax
money
for the
country
. From that, the
government
can allocate the cash into developing the nation.
Secondly
, people with a large
income
are working in industries that can put the
country
into
spotlight
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.
For example
, an infamous neurosurgeon known throughout the continent may attract visitors to the
country
for medical tourism.
Therefore
, it is sensible that the highly paid individuals contribute to the
country
.
On the contrary
, some presume that the
government
should impose a limit
to
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citizens’ earnings because it creates a huge gap
of
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in

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living standards between the wealthy and the poor. To illustrate, living expenses and prices of commodities will increase as the economy gets better.
Thus
, while the rich are still able to afford a lavish lifestyle, those with low
income
can barely make the ends meet.
Hence
, by constraining the amount
income
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of income

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,
this
issue may be eliminated. In my opinion, I believe that professionals should be able to earn the
money
they deserve. If they are outstanding and accomplished in their fields of work, they should be offered the pay that reflects their work. If a limit were to
put
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upon, they will be unmotivated in performing their job. To conclude, a small group of highly skilled professionals does reserve the
rights
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to get paid extravagantly. Some disagree
to
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with

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this
phenomenon and presume
government
is responsible to
control
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, as it could create certain problems for the poor.
Nonetheless
, if people’s salaries are restrained, it will stir up indifference for the skilled.
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