Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now "one big traffic jam". How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern and globalized world the necessity for acquiring a
car
is increasing and a major concern in big cities, the reasons for purchasing a
car
sometimes go beyond luxury and fall into the necessity of a four-member family to
travel
around the
city
since early hours.
However
, the increasing amount of families acquiring a vehicle is growing and at the same level traffic jams are
also
becoming more common. 
This
essay will agree with the former statement discussing in detail the components of the
problem
.
First
and foremost, in the past thirty years, there has been a rise in the necessity of having a
car
for personal uses, especially for families in which children go to
school
and both parents work. It is extremely difficult to leave the house early in the morning with everyone having breakfast and
travel
in public transport taking one or two infants to the
school
and later take the
time
to take another form of public transportation to arrive at work in
time
, it is certainly easier to acquire a
car
and
travel
through the
city
with more comfort and control over
time
.
For instance
, as a Mexican citizen, I know by experience that some
people
have a strong habit of taking the subway to arrive at their jobs or
school
,
however
, due to the high demand
people
need to leave their house by four or five in the morning without having breakfast or taking their children to
school
. But, what happens to those who do have a
car
in Mexico
City
? A well-known
problem
in
this
particular
city
is the traffic jams
in particular
hours in the morning and evening, especially between six and eight in the morning and late in the night. To help solve
this
problem
, the government has established a law to regulate the mobility of particular cars using the number in their
car
license plates, some numbers cannot circulate on a certain day of the week, and so on. Another important measure that they have implemented is the creation of additional routes to arrive at the same place.
Furthermore
, a personal proposal is to regulate the allowance of private vehicles in
city
centers
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on weekends to force
people
to use public transportation. All things considered, I do believe that traffic jams are a common
problem
created by the increasing number of private cars in the cities,
nevertheless
, we cannot ignore the
problem
of having to
travel
long distances to arrive at
school
or work on
time
.
This
is why,
instead
of discouraging
people
to purchase or use a
car
, governments should create some solutions to decrease the number of cars circulating at the same
time
.
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