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In many countries today, crime novels and tv crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction tv crime dramas?

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Nowadays, more and more,
novels
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 and dramas
series
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 are publishing on
crime
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 fiction.
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series
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 are thrill and full of actions which are well-liked by youngsters.
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, I argue that
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 it influences the young generation and enhance the chances of increasing
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 among society. On the one hand, the entertainment industry has been changing rapidly.
People
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 prefer to watch movies or dramas which are based on action and thrill because the content of these is more exciting;
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, it is full of suspense.
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,
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 are
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 getting print on
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series
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.
Stories
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 based on
crime
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 fiction is more in demand because of their content.
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, In India, the scaring game is one of the popular
series
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 which is based on
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, action and which made the producer to launched its
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 one after another. It is
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 becoming a great source of income in the industry.
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, with the increased demand and change in the entertainment of
people
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,
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 crimes
series
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 and
novels
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 are becoming popular in the community. On the other side, it increases the chances of enhancing
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 in society. Young
people
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 may get influences by the story and will try to attempt those stunts in their real life. Spidermen movie is of its example, as after watching the movie, youngsters try to attempt those stunts at their own in absence of their adults, which may lead to having a bad impact on their life.
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, stunts performed in movies that are based on robbery will boost the
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 of theft among society.
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, these
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 have a bad impact on the community. To conclude, As crimes
stories
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 are based on action and suspense;
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, it is being liked by
people
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. But chances of increasing
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 will
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 be there;
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, as per my opinion, the publishers should create an age permit on watching movies and selling of
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 based on
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stories
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.
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