Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, in society
people
’s opinion about travelling divided
into two groups. Add a missing verb
is divided
First
support the idea of usefulness
of trips, while another group of citizens consider that it is waste of Add an article
the usefulness
time
and money. This
essay will discuss both arguments in further
paragraphs.
Initially
, it is often said that travelling expands worldview and helps open new horizons. Due to pandemic
Correct article usage
the pandemic
situation
in the world, Fix the agreement mistake
situations
people
stay at home and missed the opportunity to explore new places. Despite them, they can travel and get valuable experience and enjoy. Commonly trips cause positive emotions, relieve stress and improve psychological
state. It is motivating them to continue travelling. Add an article
the psychological
Moreover
, tourists get knowledge about local culture and country. For instance
, I travelled to Canada and learn a lot about native
language, which is new for me.
On the other side, it Correct pronoun usage
my native
is takes
a lot of Change the verb form
takes
time
, money and requires high responsibility. Every time
, when people
visit new
country, they face wit list of problems. If you find yourself in an Arab country, Add an article
a new
then
you will follow their culture. It spoils the impression of the trip and people
begin to regret the money spent. In addition
, travelers
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travellers
not
always board the flight on Add a missing verb
do not
time
. Due to different problems, there is a delay in the duration of hours in travelling to their destinations. For example
, my flight was delay
to 3 hours due to technical problems. We have not received any compensation but lost Add an article
a delay
the delay
time
. Responsibility too takes significant
role in Add an article
a significant
journey
. Being prepared for everything requires a lot of effort from a person.
To conclude, I personally believe that travelling takes Add an article
the journey
vital
part in our life and Add an article
a vital
people
should be on travel every year. In this
way, we get maximum benefit.Submitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on
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