Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, in society
people
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’s opinion about travelling
divided
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is divided
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into two groups.
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support the idea of
usefulness
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the usefulness
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of trips, while another group of citizens consider that it is waste of
time
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and money.
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essay will discuss both arguments in
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, it is often said that travelling expands worldview and helps open new horizons. Due to
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the pandemic
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situation
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in the world,
people
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stay at home and missed the opportunity to explore new places. Despite them, they can travel and get valuable experience and enjoy. Commonly trips cause positive emotions, relieve stress and improve
psychological
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the psychological
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state. It is motivating them to continue travelling.
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, tourists get knowledge about local culture and country.
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, I travelled to Canada and learn a lot about
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language, which is new for me. On the other side, it
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a lot of
time
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, money and requires high responsibility. Every
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, when
people
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visit
new
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country, they face wit list of problems. If you find yourself in an Arab country,
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you will follow their culture. It spoils the impression of the trip and
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begin to regret the money spent.
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,
travelers
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travellers
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not
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do not
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always board the flight on
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. Due to different problems, there is a delay in the duration of hours in travelling to their destinations.
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, my flight was
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a delay
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to 3 hours due to technical problems. We have not received any compensation but lost
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. Responsibility too takes
significant
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a significant
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role in
journey
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the journey
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. Being prepared for everything requires a lot of effort from a person. To conclude, I personally believe that travelling takes
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a vital
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part in our life and
people
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should be on travel every year. In
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way, we get maximum benefit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • broadens horizons
  • cultural exposure
  • tolerance
  • self-reliance
  • overcoming challenges
  • language proficiency
  • sustainable tourism
  • environmental footprint
  • cultural homogenization
  • commercialization
  • responsible travel
  • global understanding
  • eco-friendly practices
  • accessible alternatives
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