People are against the legalization of euthanasia while other people support it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Euthanasia is a topic of high discussion all over the world and it divides the globe with pro and against
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notion, while people are protesting medically assisted suicide, in ,contrast some individuals are in favour of it. I am in support of
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elaborate the issue in detail to justify my view. In medically assisted suicide is a newer field and members among the field keep debating on
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development, one group taking it as a boon for
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who are suffering from non-curable diseases like cancer ,life-debilitating injuries where there is an obvious fact that there is no chance of recovery and the
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have to endure pain and suffering until their natural death.
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becoming a financial, social and emotional burden on family ,society and in long run on the government. Life-sustaining medical equipment gets engaged on
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equipment are not available for acute and reversible treatment where the result of the effort is favourable. the medical staff working on terminally ill
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another issue as a great number of staff remained occupied with
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population and had no fruitful outcome. Opponents of euthanasia take it as a moral issue as
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itself is one type of killing the living individual and they don't want to engage in
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a cruel act. Another danger of misuse of
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by people of interest is to get rid of trouble making personalities or relatives for personal gain using the medical system. There Is a hidden danger of hospitals becoming human killing machinery for-profit ignoring human rights and filling up society once it becomes legal. In final say ,
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I will support the idea of medically assisted suicide for enabling the sufferers to decide about their fate of life and death but I strongly recommend strict government policies for euthanasia and the provision of the strongest punishments in case of proven misuse.
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