Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree? (Agree or Disagree)

There is a widespread belief that the expenditure on technological advancement in space discovery should not be prioritized over more beneficial ways. In my perspective, I partly align with

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the following reasons. On one hand, it is reasonable to invest a great deal of money in space exploration, as it may help find livable places in case of a doomsday scenario. There is a range of issues that pose threats to our planet,

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as serious pollution, global warming, wars and aggressive conflicts. If humans can no longer settle on Earth, we could move to a more habitable place in outer space,

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spatial high-tech being paid attention

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Developing technology in space-relating areas

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helps boost other innovations in other fields. Take famous entrepreneur Elon Musk for an illustration. He gave his artificial intelligence serving satellites his financial backing, resulting in considerably better quality in operating computer systems.

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, a large proportion of funding shall be given to other alarming problems, including environment, education, confrontation and health, to name but a few. These issues are far more necessary for people to devote their budget, since they exist in everyday life, having direct impacts on an entity’s survivability

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the prospect of the Earth's demise seems unlikely to happen.

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, tackling those challenges ensures human physical health and well-being, which are the ultimate goal for almost anybody to achieve.

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, many well-to-do wanting

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health security, have already paid millions to get better healthcare or eco-friendly equipment,

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. All things considered, both ways deserve people's backing up, in accordance with the desire to reach higher life quality and safety assurance.