In the past, sporting champions used to motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days, they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What does this message send to young people and how this attitude to sport affect to the sports themselves.
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Sports
competition is an event that has been holding worldwide for many centuries. In each era, there is a different kind of winning motivation. Nowadays, we have to accept that prize money
and popularity has become crucial roles of being an inspiration in the sports
field. This
concept has impacted both young people perception and the field of the sport itself.
Firstly
, this
concept can contribute to the acknowledgement of young generation which the sports
are not activities that we can keep on practising and playing to conquer ourselves and other players, ,
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this
pathway can be used to establish the wealth of our lives. This
idea has illustrated that the things that are significant in our lives these days are changed from the past. In the past, honour
was the important term which the sportspersons have a great honour
for being the champion. For instance
, the athlete who won the gold medal would be recognised as the hero of the country. However
, today people are not just only concerned about honour
but also
regarded wealth. Therefore
, the young generation would acknowledge that the honour
of champion itself is not the most important part of their lives, the wealth can also
contribute to happy living life.
By using money
to inspire athletes, the goal of competition will not just to compete with other players, but also
it would be to make money
and reputation. This
idea might lead to the excessive effort of winning the game which can affect as bad outcomes of the sports
competition. For example
, the athletes may have done everything that they could in order to win the games, such
as using the forbidden supplements. By applying the concept, the sports
will not be just sports
competitions, but it will be places where people can make money
.
In conclusion, the idea of prizing the winners by money
and reputation might lead to wrong objectives of sport for young generation. Moreover
, it will totally change the authentic goals of sport
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