Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays,

talent

hunt

program

is very common among general

people

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I will give the answer to both questions.

Firstly

, I will explore why it is a good

way

to get new

talent

and

secondly

I will discuss what they can

also

besides

entertainment

purposes. In

this

modern era,

television

program

becomes famous in some

society

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societies

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because most of the shows are quality and the whole family can

also

watch. On

television based

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talented

program

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programs

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, most of the time authority set

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aim to produce some

talent

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, yearly Banglavision tv arranged

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music hunt

shows

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. It is

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easy

way

to find a

qualityful

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quality

singer because the participants passed several stages to come into the main shows. Without delightful ,

talent

no one can come there. The

way

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the

television

is perfect because they take a test of participants and judges are

also

qualities. ,

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there is no other better

way

to find

talent

. So that, a

telivision

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television

based

talent

program

is a good

way

to find

talent

because only real

talent

can do perform on that type of huge stage. Talented artists are mirrors of our society. They give us

entertainment

at the same time social message though of fun. But

besides

entertainment

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they are

also

able to do other social work. Because common

people

are very much influenced by celebrities. Like Amir Khan, he is an actor in the

bollywood

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industry. a big number of

people

follow him. So that, it is really easy to give any valuable message by him and

people

will maintain his instruction because his fans are loving him. So we can follow

this

type of

strategies

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. In conclusion, find talented

people

is difficult but

television

shows make it easy. Most of the time artists are came though of these kinds of shows and

besides

entertainment

artists

also

important for our society because they have a great value.

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Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

What are the pros and cons of using public transport?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?