Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays,
talent
hunt
program
is very common among general
people
. In
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I will give the answer to both questions.
Firstly
, I will explore why it is a good
way
to get new
talent
and
secondly
I will discuss what they can
also
do
besides
entertainment
purposes. In
this
modern era,
television
program
becomes famous in some
society
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societies
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because most of the shows are quality and the whole family can
also
watch. On
television based
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television-based
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talented
program
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programs
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, most of the time authority set
a
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aim to produce some
talent
.
For example
, yearly Banglavision tv arranged
a
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music hunt
shows
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. It is
a
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easy
way
to find a
qualityful
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quality
singer because the participants passed several stages to come into the main shows. Without delightful ,
talent
no one can come there. The
way
follow
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the
television
is perfect because they take a test of participants and judges are
also
qualities. ,
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there is no other better
way
to find
talent
. So that, a
telivision
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television
based
talent
program
is a good
way
to find
talent
because only real
talent
can do perform on that type of huge stage. Talented artists are mirrors of our society. They give us
entertainment
at the same time social message though of fun. But
besides
entertainment
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they are
also
able to do other social work. Because common
people
are very much influenced by celebrities. Like Amir Khan, he is an actor in the
bollywood
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industry. a big number of
people
follow him. So that, it is really easy to give any valuable message by him and
people
will maintain his instruction because his fans are loving him. So we can follow
this
type of
strategies
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. In conclusion, find talented
people
is difficult but
television
shows make it easy. Most of the time artists are came though of these kinds of shows and
besides
entertainment
artists
also
important for our society because they have a great value.
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