Write about the following topic. It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, there is no doubt that
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is
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constantly
being developed and becoming more advanced. People are being concerned that as
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development continues,
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many
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traditional cultures will eventually be neglected or vanished since they think these two can not exist together. Personally speaking, I believe that these traditional activities and events can still be conserved while society is constantly developing, so I slightly disagree with the statement. Many people believe that
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many conventional habits or lifestyles will
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to exist if our community is always growing and becoming more advanced.
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is because we are increasingly becoming more dependent on
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by means of exploiting their
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convenience
and
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see
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how neglect and forget the traditional methods of
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certain
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.
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, in China, a lot of companies develop various apps for transferring lucky money and flowers virtually during the Chinese New Year.
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, defeating the
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initial
purpose and meaning of
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holiday, which is gathering with your loved ones or family members and wishing others good luck.
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, let's not forget that during the COVID wave
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year, many students were stuck
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foreign countries and could not travel back to their hometowns to celebrate several holidays with their parents due to new regulations and there was no availability of planes.
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of the topic, we can not deny the
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convenience
of
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since many users use their platforms on social media to raise more awareness towards the conventional music genres and instruments.
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,
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numerous
studios and radio stations are
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collapsing
with singers of older generations to talk about how old songs are
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being
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neglected on national television and
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is one of the ways that
technology
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can help to promote and conserved these genres.
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, on
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the VTV
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channel in Vietnam, there is a show that
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famous artists that belong to the older genres to discuss the effect and results of traditional songs being abandoned.
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,
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causing
a domino effect where many projects were being established to bring more publicity for
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line of music to prevent it from vanishing. In conclusion, there is a significant development of computers and the community is concerned that long-established cultures can not live amongst
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.
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, I think that
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issue is less likely to happen.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inevitable
  • erosion of traditional cultures
  • modern conveniences
  • neglecting traditional practices
  • cultural exchange
  • documentation
  • traditional art forms
  • global audience
  • continued relevance
  • oral histories
  • digitize ancient texts
  • cultural heritage sites
  • preservation of heritage
  • embracing modern advancements
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