Write about the following topic. It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there is no doubt that

technology

is

constanly

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constantly

being developed and becoming more advanced. People are being concerned that as

this

development continues,

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many

any

traditional cultures will eventually be neglected or vanished since they think these two can not exist together. Personally speaking, I believe that these traditional activities and events can still be conserved while society is constantly developing, so I slightly disagree with the statement. Many people believe that

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many conventional habits or lifestyles will

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to exist if our community is always growing and becoming more advanced.

This

is because we are increasingly becoming more dependent on

technology

by means of exploiting their

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convenience

and

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see

some

how neglect and forget the traditional methods of

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doing

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certain

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tasks

tags

.

For example

, in China, a lot of companies develop various apps for transferring lucky money and flowers virtually during the Chinese New Year.

Therefore

, defeating the

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initial

purpose and meaning of

this

holiday, which is gathering with your loved ones or family members and wishing others good luck.

However

, let's not forget that during the COVID wave

last

year, many students were stuck

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foreign countries and could not travel back to their hometowns to celebrate several holidays with their parents due to new regulations and there was no availability of planes.

On the other hand

of the topic, we can not deny the

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convenience

of

technology

since many users use their platforms on social media to raise more awareness towards the conventional music genres and instruments.

Furthermore

,

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numerous

studios and radio stations are

collabing

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collapsing

with singers of older generations to talk about how old songs are

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neglected on national television and

this

is one of the ways that

technology

can help to promote and conserved these genres.

For instance

, on

VTV

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the VTV

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channel in Vietnam, there is a show that

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famous artists that belong to the older genres to discuss the effect and results of traditional songs being abandoned.

Therefore

,

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causing

a domino effect where many projects were being established to bring more publicity for

this

line of music to prevent it from vanishing. In conclusion, there is a significant development of computers and the community is concerned that long-established cultures can not live amongst

this

.

However

, I think that

this

issue is less likely to happen.