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Some people feel that robots are very important to humans’ future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on the society. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Although
 some people think
robots
 are beneficial, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on the citizens. It is always important to have technical advancements in
society
, so it is important to have new advancements like
robots
. In
this
 ,essay we discuss both sides of the importance of
robots
.
First
 and foremost there is a lot of dangerous tasks that humans perform in many regions, which may be life-threatening for them.
For example
, nations working in the mining industry have to go deep inside the earth for mining purposes and it is very dangerous for them as there are many dangerous gases present in the mining environment it is possible for the community to inhale those gases and fall sick.,
Furthermore
 it is always beneficial to have scientific
bots
 doing the mining works, as they don't have any limitations and we reduce the risk of having to lose more lives in the mining industry. To commence with there is always a fear of the scientific
bots
 taking over the earth in
society
. And it is not true though they have the intelligence of doing a task by using their own system, it is impossible for them to think of taking over the world,
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 crowd watch many sci-fi movies and think of
this
 happening and have a negative opinion on
robots
.And one more thing that the community think
bots
 take over are the job opportunities, Yes using
bots
 may make some people lose their jobs but it leads to
society
 having new inventions and many working opportunities for them . To conclude we can say that it is possible for
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society
 to realise that it is beneficial for them to have
robots
 do
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dangerous work than risking lives of their own kind. And it is
also
 beneficial for the citizens for the growth in
technolgy
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technology
 so
crowd
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 can have new
oppurtunities
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opportunities
 to grow in life. By
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 we can say that people will change in the future and accept the fact that it is ok to have
artifical
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artificial
 humans do most work because they have a lot of advantages.
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