Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree
Without a doubt, computers have become an integral part of almost every child's life. Most of the entertainment content, games, films, music, and especially educational content in the context of the coronavirus pandemic, would not be possible without a
computer
. Even though being in front of a computer
for a long time
can harm the teenager's physical and mental health, I still think the benefits outweigh them.
We live in an era of modern digital technologies and the skill of using computers ensures that in the future the youth can easily integrate into society and be a full part of it. The example of the Covid-19 Pandemic has shown the whole world that a process such
as schooling can go online at any moment, due to circumstances beyond our control. I believe that you need to be flexible and adapt to changing conditions, especially children. The computer
can always help to replenish the child's knowledge about the world around him and this
is his value.
Nevertheless
, everyone knows that a long stay in front of the monitor not only negatively affects the kid's vision, but also
his posture. For example
, if a youth spends most of the day at the computer
, he does not have time
for activities and sports. And any personality should develop harmoniously, not only mentally, but also
physically. Therefore
, I believe that the time
at the computer
should be controlled by the juvenile's parents.
In conclusion, I would like to say that a computer
is a universal tool. How to use it, for the benefit or harm of the child, depends largely on the parents and their attention to this
issue. The main thing is to find the right balance between time
at the computer
and the youngster's physical activity.Submitted by Nikolay on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite