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The proliferation of social
media
platforms has significantly altered the way we interact, leading many to argue that digital connections are supplanting traditional face-to-face interactions. This
essay will consider both perspectives on this
issue, with a focus on the Vietnamese context.
The argument is that social media
has detrimental impacts on social interaction
. The primary concern is that without face-to-face interaction
, many relationships generally, would be faded, lacking the emotional richness that comes with physical interaction
. For instance
, in Vietnam, the elderly often express bewilderment and sadness as they observe younger family members absorbed in their smartphones during family gatherings, traditionally a time for bonding and meaningful conversation. As a result
, relationships between members of a family,
would break down. At the same time, they would be able to lack of feeling emotions about mental
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However
, I believe that the benefits of social media
in contemporary society outweigh the drawbacks. Firstly
, these platforms offer unprecedented opportunities for connectivity and information dissemination. During the COVID-19 pandemic, millions of Vietnamese were reliant on platforms like Facebook and Zalo for up-to-date information and as a means to maintain social ties when physical contact was restricted. Moreover
, social media
facilitates connections that would be otherwise
impossible, bringing together like-minded individuals regardless of geographical constraints. For example
, a young Vietnamese entrepreneur in Hanoi can easily collaborate with a tech expert in Ho Chi Minh City, optimizing both their productivity and social capital.
In conclusion, while
the ascendancy of social media
has engendered legitimate concerns about the erosion of face-to-face interactions, its advantages in enhancing communication and accessibility are too significant to overlook. Therefore
, it is my conviction that the benefits of social media
interaction
outweigh its associated disadvantagesSubmitted by pnkhanhlove on
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