Increasing number of students are going to university instead of working after high school. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who do this.

Education plays an essential role in everyone's life. There

are

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large

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number of people are studying to

university

rather than doing

job

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after secondary school.

This

trend can affect both

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of individuals. In

this

essay, I will discuss both pros and cons associated with

this

trend.

To begin

with, the

first

important reason

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going to

university

is the availability of ample

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professional courses. More and more students can

enrolls

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in different professional courses

such

as MBBS, L.L.B, Engineering etc according to their choice.

Furthermore

, if the person has any professional degree, they have more value as compared to those who study less.

In addition

, students who have

degree

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have more creative and intelligent skills which

helps

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to gain high earning in future.

For instance

, the professor of

university

and

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android

developer earn very high in their

carrer

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career

carrier

.

Thus

, studying in

university

is very important to choose their professional job.

On the other hand

,

besides

the upsides of

this

trajectory, the drawback cannot be undermined.

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Firstly

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,

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practical knowledge is more important than

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theoretical

.

individual

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an individual

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who

work

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after high school has more understanding and experience of

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field. So, when they study after work, they can clear more easily the meaning and concepts.

Secondly

, the

tutions

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tuition

fee of universities are high which everyone's cannot

affordable

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. Some parents do not have

capacity

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to study to educate the students

in

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higher

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a higher

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level.

Thus

, fresher

helps

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their parents in earning money. In conclusion, it is clear that a student

decision

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to acquire a

university

instead

of going to work directly

both

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merits and demerits.