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Developed countries should help poor nations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people claim that the encouragement of poverty communities should be assisting by wealthy nations.
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, globalization must care about these nations starvation issues and it is essential for their exists.
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, I strongly agree that assist them could make good international relations with them when it develops.
Firstly
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, cuisine and medicine is a significant determinant of human survive and depend on each other give many pros. Helping underdeveloped states can lead to good allies between nations and benefit both public in many aspects.
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, a country like the USA, and much more helping scarcity regions
such
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 as Africa apply export their supply and water with condition that they have to grow some plants in the land of the village. African coffee is the obvious solution to solve the problems and both gain advantage from it.
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 product can be an auction in the global market and give lots of income.
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, the rescue of illness people in poorness state receives knowledge and ability. Rarity disease mostly was found in these regions, so cure from the developed public can improve advance of technology in a medical way. Some regions have no hospitals so doctors have been sent to help them. These make them more experience in primary patients and critical cases. In my opinion, it's important for communities to help each other. Helping doesn't mean only give it
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 gain benefits together in economy and existence.
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, developed land
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 gain things in education way to progress the vaccine or medical innovation to prepare some ailment that might happen in own citizen in future.
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