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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popluar. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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There is a distinctive growth of
crime
 associated
content
 all over the world. Numerous
people
 enjoy
crime
 books or video
content
such
 as dramas or movies for the feeling of thrill and interesting
stories
.
However
, from my own perspective, the popularity of
crime
stories
 could occur adverse side effects.
This
 essay will elaborate on why
people
 are addicted to
crime
content
 but why it should not be encouraged in society.
To begin
 with, admittedly,
crime
stories
 can be relatively attractive for their provocative features. Generally speaking,
crime
 contents have several factors which bring
people
's attention,
such
 as interesting
stories
 and indirect experiences of offenders or victims. Both factors are considered hard to find in other types of
content
, including love
stories
 and other wholesome
stories
.
That is
 to say,
people
 are enticed to
crime
 books and videos because of their differences and uniqueness.
However
, regardless of how interesting the
stories
 are, they should not be universal. To explain, the major problem it could cause is unconscious effects on
people
, particularly on children and teenagers. As young
people
 can access those provocative
stories
 and scenes, there is the likelihood that the
stories
 are remained in the deep brain and manipulate youngsters to cause crimes. It is an irrefutable truth that there are more and more crimes occur which are similar to drama or movie
stories
 as they actually provide
people
 with an idea or an inspiration of crimes. In conclusion,
crime
-related books, dramas, movies are getting common and popular due to their unique
stories
 and indirect experience that
people
 can achieve.
Nevertheless
,
people
 should take the consequences into consideration. The adverse effects that young
people
 will get as well as the growth of similar offences which are copied from
crime
 contents.
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