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Write an essay of about 250 words to answer the following question “Why do you want to become a student of Foreign Language School for The Gifted?

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My dream is to attend a Foreign
Language
School
 for the Gifted. Since my
first
 visit
the
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school
, I have become instantly interested in the curriculum and extracurricular
activities
 at
school
.
Then
 I have concluded that Foreign
Language
School
 For The Gifted is without a doubt where I will spend my high
school
 days. In
this
 following essay, the reasons, why I want to be a student of Foreign
Language
School
 For The Gifted, will be analyzed.
Firstly
,
teachers
 at Foreign
Language
School
 For The Gifted are not only professional and professional but
also
 dedicated to their profession and are always close and friendly to
students
. Most of the
school
's foreign
language
teachers
 have worked and studied abroad, are sensitive to new things, and are ready to adapt to any changes in educational life. It will be rare to find a
school
 like Specialty Foreign Languages when every teacher can be both a teacher, a teacher, a friend, a parent, and a psychologist so that
students
 can honestly confide everything in their lives. Living. From classroom lessons or life stories during recess to secret confidants, emotional vibrations of
first
 love
students
 can confide in their
teachers
.
Secondly
, Foreign
Language
 Gifted High
School
 has more than 16 different clubs in the fields of science, sports, management, social volunteering
activities
. The club is operated under the leadership of the
students
 themselves and
besides
 the supervision and mentoring of the
teachers
 in the
school
. Every week, the
school
also
 organizes collective extracurricular
activities
 for
students
, under various topics, to help
students
 have more opportunities to improve and practice their communication skills. Continue, improve the sense of responsibility and discipline, experience in practice, and hone skills to handle all problems and situations. From the fact that
students
 can participate in club
activities
 to satisfy their personal interests, and along with that, they participate in extracurricular
activities
 organized by the
school
 on a regular basis.
Students
 are able to bring into full play their strengths, improve their confidence, be more active, more sociable, and more creative in learning In conclusion, being a student of Foreign
Language
School
 For The Gifted has many benefits.
Therefore
, I will try my best to make my dream come true
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