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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and solution you can suggest.

#internet #information
The
internet
 has been a big revolution in changing the world . Information is passed
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through
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though
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through
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 many ways but with the
internet
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it is passed in few seconds .In
this
 essay, I will discuss what are the hurdles
has
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 been created by the
internet
 and how to remove them.
To begin
 with, nowadays
children
 spend
lot
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 of time surfing on social media ,playing video games and watching movies which in return
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affect
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effect
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affect
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 their studies and health.
For example
, a university of china did a survey in which it was found that 70
percentage
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 of
children
 who don’t have physical activity are suffering from obesity and eyesight weakness.
In addition
 to that ,the
internet
provide
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 information about various illegal things
such
 as adult movies and
weapon making
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 sites which are very bad and dangerous for society .
Hence
, the
internet
 has created many difficulties which
was
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 not present which was not present in earlier times. Every problem has to be cured. To solve
this
 kind of problem parents of
children
 should keep a watch on the activities of their
children
. Guardian of
children
 should spend valuable time with their kids and teach them about which are the important things on which they should focus on in order to have bright future and good health.
moreover
, the problem regarding illegal things can be removed by taking strict and enforcement action against the culprits
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.
For instance
,
government
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the government
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 should ban
these kind
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this kind
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 of websites and put people behind the bar who prepares and publish
this
 kind of irrelevant material. To sum up, the
internet
 has numerous merits and demerits and it depends upon
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 wisdom
how
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on how
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 to use the
internet
 wisely and effectively to gain knowledge.
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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