The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and solution you can suggest.

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has been a big revolution in changing the world . Information is passed

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through

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though

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through

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many ways but with the

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it is passed in few seconds .In

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essay, I will discuss what are the hurdles

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been created by the

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and how to remove them.

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with, nowadays

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spend

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of time surfing on social media ,playing video games and watching movies which in return

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effect

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affect

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their studies and health.

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, a university of china did a survey in which it was found that 70

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of

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who don’t have physical activity are suffering from obesity and eyesight weakness.

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to that ,the

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provide

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information about various illegal things

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as adult movies and

weapon making

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weapon-making

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sites which are very bad and dangerous for society .

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, the

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has created many difficulties which

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not present which was not present in earlier times. Every problem has to be cured. To solve

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kind of problem parents of

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should keep a watch on the activities of their

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. Guardian of

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should spend valuable time with their kids and teach them about which are the important things on which they should focus on in order to have bright future and good health.

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, the problem regarding illegal things can be removed by taking strict and enforcement action against the culprits

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,

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the government

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should ban

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of websites and put people behind the bar who prepares and publish

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kind of irrelevant material. To sum up, the

internet

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has numerous merits and demerits and it depends upon

person

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wisdom

how

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on how

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to use the

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wisely and effectively to gain knowledge.