in many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

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modern society, while some people prefer sending their toddlers to co-institutes or

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where they could find students

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gender, others believe that it would have more drawbacks to the future of a child. I totally disagree with the

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half of

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and strongly agree with the latter part.

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, if I would say why I disagree with

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who are willing to send their children to one-sex

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or co-educational institutions

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because the unavailability to interact with the opposite gender in childhood may cause some bad effects in the future;

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, that could be lead to defeat all the goals and expectations too.

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, when a girl grew up and became young, if she has not ever co-op with a peer boy, perhaps she will tend to think that the

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boy she meets is the best person in the world and a hero;

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, it does not the reality. She will be cheated by him easily and he will be able to drag her life into a

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situation.

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or co-educational

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will not be a good decision to be taken by

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that there would have many drawbacks of keeping their toddler in a

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college to his or her future endeavours. I strongly agree with them because I always believe that companions should not be

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the same gender.

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, whenever

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both boys and girls are in

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same classroom the competition among them will be improved inevitably and it will be encouraged both types of gangs to do their studies hard. In a

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there is no allure like that. To sum up, it is clearly described why I totally accept

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who believe unisex

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are the best and who think

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more drawbacks.