in many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?
In
the
modern society, while some people prefer sending their toddlers to co-institutes or Correct article usage
apply
schools
where they could find students in
Change preposition
of
same
gender, others believe that it would have more drawbacks to the future of a child. I totally disagree with the Change the article
the same
first
half of parents
and strongly agree with the latter part.
Firstly
, if I would say why I disagree with parents
who are willing to send their children to one-sex schools
or co-educational institutions,
because the unavailability to interact with the opposite gender in childhood may cause some bad effects in the future; Remove the comma
apply
moreover
, that could be lead to defeat all the goals and expectations too. For example
, when a girl grew up and became young, if she has not ever co-op with a peer boy, perhaps she will tend to think that the first
boy she meets is the best person in the world and a hero; however
, it does not the reality. She will be cheated by him easily and he will be able to drag her life into a pathentic
situation. Correct your spelling
pathetic
Therefore
using single sex
Add a hyphen
single-sex
schools
or co-educational schools
will not be a good decision to be taken by parents
.
On the other hand
, a part of our society think
that there would have many drawbacks of keeping their toddler in a Change the verb form
thinks
single sex
college to his or her future endeavours. I strongly agree with them because I always believe that companions should not be Add a hyphen
single-sex
in
the same gender. Change preposition
of
For instance
, whenever the
both boys and girls are in Remove the article
apply
a
same classroom the competition among them will be improved inevitably and it will be encouraged both types of gangs to do their studies hard. In a Change the article
the
single sex
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single-sex
school
there is no allure like that.
To sum up, it is clearly described why I totally accept Add a comma
,school
parents
who believe unisex schools
are the best and who think otherwise
there will Change the verb form
have
be have
more drawbacks.Correct your spelling
behave
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