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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead? Write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays, in different parts of the world
people
 have moved to various developed countries like UK, Canada, the USA, and Australia. There are many factors that are influenced by
this
 case.
This
 essay will explore why might be
this
 case and other major factors of move-out from the mother
country
.
First
 of all, many
people
 around the world prefer to move the developed countries. It has a number of advantages rather than drawbacks.
Therefore
, Students could learn their higher education in a foreign
country
. It would help them to find out various career opportunities and make their life as a better lifestyle and used various
facilities
,
such
 as the public transport system, the library services, medical services, educational sectors and many more. Students can earn money work part-time in their degree time period compared to the native
country
. Secondary, consider to the way of
people
 move from mother-land to international
country
, which are influenced some certain reasons.
Such
 as, various negative political policies and environment are influenced by the citizen’s lives, social and cultural issues, they cannot utilize developed public
facilities
 compared to the foreign nation, environmental or community issues, poor health
facilities
 and cannot spend better lifestyle, lack of higher educational
facilities
 like modern technological instruments, lab
facilities
, reputed universities and many more.
However
, Consider the developed countries that have to face various bad circumstances due to drastic migration patterns. For
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, the overpopulation issues, unemployment problems, environmental pollution could be significantly increased other communities and
also
 cultural diversities difficulties. In conclusion, from my point of view, many
people
 claim that positive trend to migrate in the global.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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