As compared to the past people today are choosing to have fewer children than their parents and grandparents. Describe some of the problems that having fewer children can cause and suggest at least one possible solution.

Population
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is
one
of the major problems currently faced by many developing countries. Particularly, the
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like China and India. So, to counteract
this
, few nations have implemented a law of small family norms.
Moreover
, nowadays many
parents
also
need
one
or two children.
Although
this
has got many merits, the demerits are unnegotiable.
This
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the topic in detail in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, being in a nuclear family without
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siblings can cause many issues.
First
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one
is developing
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stubborn nature. Followed by
this
, adamant behaviour is
the
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another
one
.
Moreover
, the dangerous
one
is lonely feels and
this
can even lead to psychological problems in future.
For example
, a study conducted by Punjab University, India proved that the social anxiety behaviour is more among single
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kids
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when compared with a
child
, who is living with his siblings. To summarize, the small family norms will affect the
child
if he did
nor
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not
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gets attention from the
parents
.
On the contrary
, there are a set of solutions which help to improve the above-mentioned issues.
Firstly
,
parents
should spend some quality time with their
kid
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irrespective of their job schedules.
Besides
this
, the
parents
should introduce the
child
to a good peer group. Along with
this
, the school teachers
also
assist the
child
in
his
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each
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stage of development.
This
helps to increase
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confidence
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him
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. To summarize,
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offering attention as well as corrections of mistakes will helps the
child
to develop a positive attitude towards
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society.
Finally
, reducing the population help the nation to develop easily. So, it is important to adopt small family norms.
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