Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In today's most developing and rapid-growing world popularity of an online course is an easy and more effective way. A number of humans believed that higher education should be done online, another side some thinks student have to attend college to gain the degree. While
this
trend is beneficial to some extent, I would argue that it is a more positive side of
this
.
Firstly
, one convincing argument can be made that online education is a key development in
this
century.
In addition
, there are more benefits to gain research from home
such
as save travelling costs, we were able to get a foreign degree, get more time class at home. Let's take COVID-19, as an example, due to
this
a human life stops and students are
also
not able to attend their classes so they prefer to do an online course.
Furthermore
,
this
trend is very useful in many ways and students pursue more than one study at the same time. Having said that, it is
also
undeniable that some subjects need practical study which makes online debate impossible in some way.
However
, some studies filed needs a certain level of labs or practical room which makes online examination impossible. The best relevant instance is science Universities, whoever studies in that field they need some specific instruments to performs
such
kind of task.
Additionally
, that's forces the young generation to go to college and share their ideas with each other.
Thus
, it can be concluded that every coin has it's to side, here I will strongly support online study because of the developing technology and student attend more classes in the different filed at the same time.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • accessibility
  • tuition fees
  • commuting
  • accommodation
  • multimedia
  • interactive tools
  • enhance
  • cater to
  • face-to-face interaction
  • personalized attention
  • complex concepts
  • motivation
  • discipline
  • structure
  • extracurricular activities
  • networking
  • university experience
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