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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problem

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It goes without saying that overpopulation has become a serious problem Which affects the lives of a person. A popular stratum of the society tends to believe that both government and individual should find
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ways to overcome
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 problem. I
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this
 statement. I would like to explicate in the above upcoming paragraph. Commencing with the
first
 and the foremost reason, migration has led to numerous
problems
. People's migrate in search of jobs which
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 lead to overpopulation in urban area's. Other serious consequences of poverty. In some ,places there is a lack of development which
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 arise the problem of poverty. For ,
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 rate has increased as poor living conditions. Overcrowding
also
 affected the health of youngsters, while they are involved in drug abuse and alcoholic drinking.
However
, the government should take responsibility to solve these
problems
 .
Firstly
, basic needs and medical facilities should be provided. It will help to decrease the illness and health
problems
 of a citizen.
Secondly
, development should be done
for example
 the construction of buildings and roads help them to provide wages. It will help to decrease the poverty rate.
In addition
 to these adequate funding should be given which help to tackle
such
problems
. The
finally
 more affecting policy of inner cities areas would
also
 be beneficial. Naturally, the individual should
also
 try to address these
problems
, not only it benefit for once but
also
 beneficial for others In conclusion,
thus
 it is clear
problems
 are faced by urban people's. If government and individuals should share collective
problems
, it may offer
such
 solutions.
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