Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too.

In that contemporary epoch, a decision has
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indispensable before take any huge step in life. A few folks claim that managers should have self-reliance to make decisions, whereas
others
deem that executives should take a suggestion from their workers in process of decision-making. That essay agrees with the former statement and will discuss my perspective in the subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, if when
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takes
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arrangement themselves,
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they become independent,
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they take a wrong settlement, which would face circumstances they learn from their mistakes and would never do that again. Due to that, they would not be petrified to take a risk in their lives. As a consequence, they would prosper in life. To illustrate, several administrators of the company
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gain more profit who made
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opinion themselves, rather than depend on
others
. To embark upon the
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viewpoint, when
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of the organization involves employees in order to make decisions. With that, they far
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their confusion how to boost their company by making a perfect plan because employees may aware of many circumstances as they may have worked in various
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. To cite an example, some workers know the secret to get earnings in the business since they may
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get experienced from another workplace. To recapitulate, there are two conflicts arguments that deal with self and dependant judgment-making.
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, I believe that executives should make a plan based on their perception, regardless of
others
so that they do not become dependant on
others
.
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