In many countries around the world, young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples.
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essay believes that leaving home after completing high school have more negative fates than positive and will discuss them in upcoming paragraphs.
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, there are chances like things like these could put a couple in a situation where they will think about sending their children to the child care centre and not to spend time with them.Linking Words
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