In many countries around the world, young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples.

Nowadays, Gaining independence is the

first

aim of today’s generation. Some people believe its a positive development ,whilst some think it can leave youngsters in chaos.

This

essay believes that leaving home after completing high school have more negative fates than positive and will discuss them in upcoming paragraphs. There are more chances of getting off track rather than securing a good future,

for example

, a student of that

age

can be imitated easily by the bad people to do wrong activities like taking drugs, doing smuggling of things which promotes crime. And to fulfil their fundamental needs,

moreover

, as its the shortest path to richness thoughts like these could be evolved in a high school graduated youngsters which are considered as normal.

For instance

, scientists have found 90 per cent of the crimes are done by adults of

age

around twenty. That's the

age

where parents started to think they got a stick for their old

age

and of ,sudden they found it broken.

In other words

, when it's the time for the adults to pay back what their guardians have done for them but

instead

of helping their ,

parents

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they leave. Literally, these things would make parents not make a strong bond with their loved ones and

instead

of spending money on ,

then

they could start to save that for their future. To sum up, the consequences of getting freedom early in

age

are negative as compare to positives as it can destroy the future of a high school graduated leaner and

moreover

, there are chances like things like these could put a couple in a situation where they will think about sending their children to the child care centre and not to spend time with them.