You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing
this
letter with regard to the “Oil and Gas Industry in Developing Countries”
Seminar
which will be conducted in Malaysia in October 2021.
This
topic came across when I was on the
intermet
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internet
looking for a new e-learning course
next
year. It will be a good chance for me to broaden my knowledge if I can attend
this
seminar
. Recently, I have been working in PetroVietnam – one of
leading
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Oil & Gas Group in Vietnam for 15 years. I very much appreciate your helping if you could provide me
some
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more details of
this
conference. I would like you to give me the proposed date for
this
seminar
,
thus
I can manage my schedule for attending.
Furthermore
, it would be helpful if you could email me related documents for
this
topic by email. The
last
but not least,
this
should be my
first
time in Malaysia,
thus
, I am wondering that it is possible if you could suggest
me
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some
accommondation
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accommodation
nearby the place where the
seminar
will be taken place and the related cost included Thanking you in advance for your help, I look forward to hearing from you soon
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faithfully Anh Pham
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