Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is being argued that because people are spending more

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using mobile phones and computers, they are forgetting how to interact in a

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face

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situation. I disagree with

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opinion as I believe that interaction through the

Internet

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does not change significantly our communication skills. It is a fact that the use of the

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, since its invention, is growing substantially.

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technology is improving constantly, at an amazing rate, making access easier and cheaper every day. Nowadays, there is a huge variety of equipment allowing consumers to choose from a cheaper model to a very expensive one.

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, when mobile phones were launched in Brazil, there was a waiting list to get one and the price was almost the same as a car.

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, the telecommunication providers charged a very high fee. That

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changed and connection costs are more accessible. An illustration of

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the possibility to buy one month of

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access for around ten US dollars. As individuals had more access they increased the

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they spend navigating online.

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, spending more

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connected does not mean necessarily they are not allocating

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to meet their friends and relatives.

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, the

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used on mobile phones and computers could in the past have been used for reading newspapers, books on paper or playing games. Actually, the

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makes it possible for us to communicate with people that live far from us,

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creating more possibilities for interactions.

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, communications online require almost the same set of skills as

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face

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. To conclude, the increase in the usage of online equipment does give new options for spending

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but it does not have a negative impact on relationships.

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erosion
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