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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #parents #children #members #society #school #place
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Parents
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 are believed that educating
children
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 to become well-mannered individuals in society is their responsibility.
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school
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 is
also
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 supposed to play an essential role in being a place for
children
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 to learn
this
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. In my opinion, I agree that
children
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 become good citizens under their
parents
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' education . On the one hand, people think that
school
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 is a significant part of
children
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's lives.
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,
children
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 can have better experiences than at home,
such
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 as widening their knowledge, making new friends with different personalities.
Secondly
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,
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school
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 will teach
children
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 how to defend their point of view, which improves their critical thinking and convincing abilities.
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,
children
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 will receive valid and helpful advice in difficult situations, and it helps them become good members of a community.
On the other hand
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, family plays a crucial role in
children
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's education.
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,
children
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 will practise
to communicate
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 with their
parents
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,
this
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 helps them develop language and speak fluently.
Secondly
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,
children
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 can imitate any activity of their
parents
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,
parents
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 will be an example for
children
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 to follow.
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,
children
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 will form many good habits
such
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 as politeness and obedience. Ultimately,
parents
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 who are close to their
children
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 will teach them aspects of life to be
a
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apply
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good
citizen
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citizens
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 of society.
For example
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,
children
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 are taught and guided by their
parents
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 to be conscious of environmental protection
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 as throwing garbage in the right place. In conclusion,
although
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 educating
children
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 in
school
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 is necessary, it is better and more appropriate to let
children
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 develop under their
parents
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' care.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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