Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Road
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safety
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issues have become the major concern of the modern era. A few individuals claim that slowing down the speed of automobiles
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and bikes is a terrific method to decrease the number of
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accidents, but the opponents have conflicting views.
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discuss both
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views
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and will discuss my perspective about it in the subsequent paragraphs. The proponents of the
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view say that it is good to decrease the speed of vehicles in order to improve the
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on the
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. In
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way, drivers can easily stop their vehicles before crashing into any other entity. As the result, neither there will be any mishappening on the
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nor any threat to life during riding on the vehicles. To cite an example,
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year, I was going to my town on my bike and at that time, there was fog in the surroundings, but I was riding my bike, not above the speed of forty
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per hour. Suddenly, a child came in my way, but I was successfully stopped my bike before hitting the child because of the low speed. The opponents of the
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view claim that there are other methods too to upgrade
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safety
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, either Government should construct the broad roads or it should establish the
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rule for four-wheelers. In
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law, one day only the
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which have an odd number in the
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should be allowed on the
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and the
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day for even number car.
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, it will lead to decrease the chances of threatening to life or probably reduce the possibilities of
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crashing with each other.
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, in the year 2019, the chief minister of Delhi,
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Arvind Kejriwal
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the
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law for
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. After that, the
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of
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accidents were reduced by 25% according to the data of the police department. In conclusion, it is believed that
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will improve by the decline in the speed of motorbikes and
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, the
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rule is a more effective method than it.
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, it is better to establish the
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rule for improving
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safety
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rather than slowing the vehicle's speed.
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