Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Road
safety
issues have become the major concern of the modern era. A few individuals claim that slowing down the speed of automobiles
such
as
cars
and bikes is a terrific method to decrease the number of
road
accidents, but the opponents have conflicting views.
This
essay will
first
discuss both
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views
,
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and will discuss my perspective about it in the subsequent paragraphs. The proponents of the
first
view say that it is good to decrease the speed of vehicles in order to improve the
safety
on the
road
. In
this
way, drivers can easily stop their vehicles before crashing into any other entity. As the result, neither there will be any mishappening on the
road
nor any threat to life during riding on the vehicles. To cite an example,
Last
year, I was going to my town on my bike and at that time, there was fog in the surroundings, but I was riding my bike, not above the speed of forty
kilometers
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per hour. Suddenly, a child came in my way, but I was successfully stopped my bike before hitting the child because of the low speed. The opponents of the
first
view claim that there are other methods too to upgrade
road
safety
, either Government should construct the broad roads or it should establish the
odd-even
rule for four-wheelers. In
this
law, one day only the
cars
which have an odd number in the
last
should be allowed on the
road
and the
next
day for even number car.
Consequently
, it will lead to decrease the chances of threatening to life or probably reduce the possibilities of
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crashing with each other.
For instance
, in the year 2019, the chief minister of Delhi,
Mr.
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Arvind Kejriwal
was implemented
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the
odd-even
law for
cars
. After that, the
numbers
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of
cars
accidents were reduced by 25% according to the data of the police department. In conclusion, it is believed that
although
road
safety
will improve by the decline in the speed of motorbikes and
cars
, the
odd-even
rule is a more effective method than it.
Therefore
, it is better to establish the
odd-even
rule for improving
road
safety
rather than slowing the vehicle's speed.
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