Many people think that too much attention and resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

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of god. Presently, an argument has been put forward that a myriad of efforts and

resources

are spent on the conservation of wild

species

. In my opinion, saving the existence of wildlife is beneficial for mankind. Money and

resources

being spent on national parks can be justified in many ways. The prime reason is that increase and decrease

in particular

species

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adversely

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on ecosystem. to

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, if tigers are not poaching

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deers

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then

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will exceed, which will lead to

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. Eventually,

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may

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start

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residential

areas. Another factor is that some

species

generate revenue for

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and

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source of income for

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public as well. To demonstrate it, the fur of

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has a great value in

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market as it is used for manufacturing

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winter clothes.

Along with

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, body parts of some creatures are utilised in making

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medicines to cure many health hazards,in medical fields.

Therefore

, wild

species

should be preserved

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making

a balance in biodiversity. On the other side, despite

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spending funds and

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on

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wild creatures, authority is supposed to take care of other sorts

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as climbing crime rates, burgeoning population, pollution, unemployment and many more.

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,

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should pay

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attention

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other things

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To conclude

, as per my above discussion, I opine that

although

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had better spend the

resources

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other issues, which are increasing day by day,

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wildlife and birds, especially endangered

species

should be protected as much as possible because of their indispensable role in human life.