Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries bring many positive effects. Other say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

In

this

contemporary era due to globalisation, businesses and cultures easily share among

countries

. A number of people opine that the increased field and cultural contact between

countries

give a positive result, whereas other deemed that its harm national identities.

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essay intends to analyse both perspectives before

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give my opinion. I,

however

with the former side. On the one hand, there are two main reasons why people believe in the former view.

firstly

, due to improved relationships in form of the trade sector and knowledge of culture gives strong bonding and trust, lead to bright future for

countries

.

Secondly

, Not only investment and employment but

also

economic improvement happen, as a consequence, overall growth of

countries

has accelerated.

For instance

, research states that after globalisation the 30% of improvement seen in cultural transformation worldwide, After all, these are viable reasons we can not keep away.

On the other hand

, it believed latter view by some that, they give following reasons, The main reason is a fundamental effect seen in national identity owing to cultural and trade activity by other

countries

. the youth of particular nation influence by another country and try to apply their life,

as a result

, they forgot nationalism and awareness of civilization.

Furthermore

, Not only the possibility of being distracted by unknown trade strategies but

also

the flow of information increased to succeeding generation which impact on future as well.

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am concern, national status plays a vital role for future generations, despite the fact that how much positive effect is done by globalisation.

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, Taiwan continuously loses their integrity due to over intervention by china in the form of business and civilization, at the

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end china want to amalgamation with it. In recapitulation, it can be reiterated that

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there can be a wide range of growth in economic, business and culture, the country can not ignore their harm to national identities